Welcome to adult life
When black and white disappear
and life is just shades of Grey
when right and wrong are not that clear
and justice can be manipulated in a thousand way
i decided to live the sin for a while
forget faith let us live the devil's style
give me the hell number and I'll dial
it never worked the honest way
innocents have nothing to say
and life is getting boring day by day
let us do what we have always want
without people tell us do and don't
"am a sinner" write it by the largest font
2007-01-13 05:51:59 · 10 answers · asked by going-to-light 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
No english is not my first language
2007-01-13 06:12:28 · update #1
It's pretty good! I like the emotion behind it, and I especially like the first few lines.
You may want to try to write some non-rhyming poems, as that might let your meaning come through better (e.g. "a thousand way" doesn't make as much sense as "a thousand ways" would, but that's what has to be since it needs to rhyme with "Grey")
I also found the last couple lines a bit unclear... is English your first language?
2007-01-13 06:02:51 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"When black and white disappear and life is just shades of Grey" indicates you are in a zone needing clarity. That doesn't mean give up, stop being a good person because everyone around you is lying, cheating and being dishonest. "and justice can be manipulated" so you go on to say "i decided to live the sin" and "forget faith let us live the devil's style". So you reveal you have let your morals slide and you started living your life doing whatever you wanted because "it never worked the honest way". Well, how's it going so far? Do you have a better life with the dishonest, the devious and the deceitful? How are the devils doing? Is there goodness in doing evil? Has your life improved adopting this reversed slant on reality? I wish you all the best (no pun intended) to living the "bad life". But, in time, you will see you will be getting what you have put out there. Bad attracts bad and good attracts good! Boring, innocent or otherwise. If you do something "bad" you are setting yourself up for retribution - that is someone will be wanting to come after you to right the wrong you did to them. But if you give out goodness, you will have others coming to you for more of that goodness and wanting to give you their goodness to share with you. Your life is your choice. You want excitement and evil , you'll get it! It's called "the power of intention". We do achieve for that which we go after. But you could have a world of goodness surrounding you too, and you could have goodness with excitement. All good is not necessarily boring! Goodness can be exhilarating if you know where to look! I don't know, you just sound like you have given up the search for a good life and have settled for "the evil " out of laziness, disillusionment (which only requires you to look at the problem from a different angle and you will find another solution if you open up your mind) but it seems you have given up the fight and have surrendered to the other side, which has its' flip side and that is treachery and revenge of others taking it out against you in time! It is a world of losers where no one truly cares for anyone else and all humans are fair game and all are targets for the others' evil thoughts and deeds! I say, if it's too easy, it's probably going to be sleazy! Battles are not won by apathetic surrendering. Get back in the fight, for who you really are and can be. And get real love and real meaning into your life with finding honest, kind, loving people to surround yourself with. These people will actually help you rather than use you. You will find so much more in life if you give yourself this chance. The key is you and the choices you are making. They can all be changed. The search is not boring when you realize you have so many undiscovered abilities that you will never come to know unless you are actively seeking your own clarification! It's all up to YOU! If there were nothing to discover, there would be no happy people anywhere, would there? If they can find happiness, is it not also a possibility for you if you make that your goal? That's the only secret to the whole question of good life or bad life? YOU! You are more powerful than you think you are not!
2007-01-13 15:55:06 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that its really good, anything that expresses how you feel in a way that has the power to affect others has got to be, I love it.
2007-01-13 14:00:55 · answer #3 · answered by gothboylovur 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Keep up the great work
2007-01-13 13:56:56 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
may mother nature pour the best of the blessings on u.goodluck
2007-01-13 13:56:17 · answer #5 · answered by sachkehtahu 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
anything good should be within the bounds of morality and
ethics
2007-01-13 13:56:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very true...great!
2007-01-13 13:55:14 · answer #7 · answered by ħ Ì Wêår M¥ Mê?ål Må§k 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very good.
i like it a lot
2007-01-13 13:55:32 · answer #8 · answered by Jenna 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
awesome
2007-01-13 13:54:53 · answer #9 · answered by tadpole 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it,s missing something but i,t,s not bad.
2007-01-13 13:57:35 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋