This is called death. i don't know why i wrote about this.
Death
Death, is my time near,
should i run to hid or have no fear.
Death, is it painful and overbearing,
is my life about to end,has everyone
stopped caring.
Death,is it that feeling you get when
there is no air in your body,or is it that
feeling you get when you pretend to be
a fairy.
Death, what is it really,
am i going to die,should i prepare
to cry. Am i going to leave this world
without saying goodbye.
Death,i guess no one
will ever know,or
maybe we do ,we just don't let
it show.
by:k march.
2007-01-13 03:42:33 · 4 answers · asked by kelly 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
Your poetry is good...shows what a deep thinker you are...but it is a little on the dreary side! I hope you have those hoppity ones that shout....halleluiah....I'm alive!!!!!
2007-01-13 03:47:59 · answer #1 · answered by mynickname 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that was some great "Society & culture" question! I guess that's why Yahoo Answers was created. Solely to give the world a chance to share in your insight.
How about finding a forum for writers where people are competent to give you constructive critizism rather than stroking your ego? How about taking a class where there will be an experienced teacher who has read a million poems and can share their wisdom? You are not going to learn anything by peddling your teenage angst in the "Society & culture" section. Although, you probably don't want to learn anything. You want to attract attention to yourself.
2007-01-13 20:45:51 · answer #2 · answered by Breandan 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
its really good. i love poems i write them my self too.
2007-01-13 12:07:00 · answer #3 · answered by dragontears 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sniff sniff......im gonna go to my mommy now.....
2007-01-13 11:47:49 · answer #4 · answered by Chris 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋