is that a good poem????

Question

I remember the day we first met we were so young , but I still had something for u inside my heart, I think its love because when I left I still kept you inside my heart I couldn’t forget your beautiful face and your curly hair and the smile that you used to give me every day, and I remember the summer days that took us away, away where no one could find us and where only two of us could stay. And I remember our first hug I felt warm and I felt safe with you my dear love. you gave me love you gave me hope my dearest love, but now I guess it doesn’t matter any more because you I guess forgot the every thing you used to say and the promises you have made...

Answer 1

I like it.I'm someone who writes poetry myself.

Answer 2

Its ok, it shows strong emotions but needs a little work. It is a good poem, you just need to work on it, like grammatically.

*oh and for the dummy that says "it doesn't even rhyme"... poems do not have to rhyme, pay attention more in literature class.

Answer 3

It is a great poem especially because it has your feelings. I think it does? You should publish it. Or at least make your own book. It is "SUPPER DUPPER" nice and terrific poem. You sound like a professional poet.♥♥♥♥♥

Answer 4

Yes, i think anything you put your heart & soul into is beautiful.

Answer 5

I think it sounds beautiful.

Answer 6

i like it

Answer 7

it's moderately good.
good job.

Answer 8

Its good.I like it.

Answer 9

I think its ok.

Answer 10

no