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heres the problem...i have an english summative next monday....how do i write a good essay?...for me...writing essays is extremely difficult...i wrote an essay that i spent sooo much time on...but i still only got a 70 on it....WTF??!....plz help

2007-01-12 09:56:12 · 6 answers · asked by no name 1 in Education & Reference Homework Help

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Look, it's not so hard... the first thing i'll recomend is to make kind of like a planning. Write the topic and write details about it like, let's say your topic is: "what's your favorite animal" so you start: My favorite animal are dogs.
Detail #1: they are good friends.
Detail #2: they are playful
Detail #3: they are cute.

so right there you have your 3 paragraphs that will make up the body of the essay. that's just the plaing, when you start the final draft you start with an intruduction:

"I love animals, but my favorite are dogs. I love dogs because the are good friends. Not only they are good friends but they are really playful. Other than that they are so CUTE. Those three details make dogs the best animal in the world."

So that one would be your introduction, five sentences and you just put WHY dogs are your favorite animals. Then you start paragraph 2, that will talk ONLY about how they are good friends.
The third paragraph will ONLY talk about how playful they are.
The third paragraph will ONLY talk about how cute they are.
And your concluding paragraph is going t be like a little summary about the whole essay. (don't forget to use transition words, teachers LOVE that. ex: first, finally, however)

I just found something my teacher gave my class for the Interim Assesment Test, i think it may help.

Begnning: Grabs the readers attention, contains a topic sentence, mentions the main point to be developed in the middle of the essay.
Topic Sentence: Clearly relates the prompt/question, Written as a complete sentence, contains the main idea or the writers position.
Middle: Orders developed of main points parallels order listed in the beginning. Transitional devices move reader from one idea or one paragraph to another. Suporting details include:
FIRES (facts, incidents, reasons, examples, statistics)
Ending: Contains a concluding sentence or summary.

Also it all depends on what grade you are (I'm in 7th) Dude, really if you follow this you'll get good grades, I got a level 5 (highest) in the FCAT (Florida Comprehension Assesment Test or Florida Children Abusse Test)

2007-01-12 10:41:54 · answer #1 · answered by blue_bandgeek26 3 · 2 0

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2016-10-07 01:51:01 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

Try to use not only good but appropriate vocabulary that makes your essay sound fluent. If you have got a profound word, do not try all means to squeeze it in as it will disrupt the smoothness of your essay. Just cook up an interesting plot and do a kind of mindmap so that you would not get stuck halfway at what to write.

2007-01-12 17:04:47 · answer #3 · answered by ccfruitpunch93 2 · 0 0

You should start early on writing your essay. What you do is to make an overview of what you're going to write it about. You want to organize your thoughts and what to write first. There should be 5 paragraphs. The first paragraph is the introduction of everything you're going to write about. The second, third, and fourth is about each topic you're planning to write. The conclusion (fifth paragraph) should conclude everything from the introduction. And remember to read it over and over to fix corrections! =) or you can have your teacher or someone else read it before turning it in.

2007-01-12 10:00:41 · answer #4 · answered by craz34jason 5 · 0 0

Normal essays contain 5 paragraphs.

1 intro paragraph: 5 sentences
- Includes an attention-grabbing intro
- You NEED a thesis, which is a sentence summarizing your essay.

3 body paragraphs: At least 5 sentences EACH
- Each paragraph must contain one thought or supportive idea that goes with your thesis.
- Use quotes to back up your facts

Conclusion: 3 - 5 sentences
- Restate your thesis
- Leave the readers with a good ending.

Remember, use correct grammar/spelling and descriptive words.

Here are some helpful sites: http://esl.about.com/cs/writing/ht/ht_essay.htm , http://www.riverdale.k12.or.us/~bblack/essayhow.htm , http://esl.about.com/library/howto/htessay.htm .

For the future, feel free to email me for any help. I'd love to edit your essay(s).

2007-01-12 10:07:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 5 0

I think the best thing for you to do is get as much answers from your teacher about what he/she wants in the essay even if it seems like you're bothering them all the time

2007-01-12 10:15:18 · answer #6 · answered by Dija 1 · 0 0

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