IS
Somewhere
in the Yes's,
in Nos,
An answer
Lies unseen
to
eyes unfound
by Man
Somewhere
There IS,
and is
Always has been,
And will continue to be,
Unsought-
2007-01-12 04:16:43 · 5 answers · asked by Uruk-Hai 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I did write it, when I was confused. No depth? You are not fit to judge poetry!
2007-01-12 04:22:21 · update #1
If you like or don't like these, check my other ones, under "who likes these poems?"
2007-01-12 04:24:16 · update #2
Poetry
is freedom,
a way to put your thoughts
unevenly out to the world
for them to ponder on.
2007-01-12 04:39:31 · update #3
Sorry i'm not feeling this one.
2007-01-12 04:19:34 · answer #1 · answered by Amber G 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sorry, rica. not my style of poetry. you can try to fit more than one or two words per line, you know? i like the main theme but i thought you could have expounded upon it a little more.
keep writing though and don't get too discouraged. you have potential.
2007-01-12 04:28:31 · answer #2 · answered by alyssa h 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, did you write it? It's rather short but profound and urges the reader to think and read between the lines.
2007-01-12 04:20:14 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has good rhythm to it, but I would have liked to see a little more depth
2007-01-12 04:19:42 · answer #4 · answered by kristonianinstitution 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it....
2007-01-12 04:20:02 · answer #5 · answered by davelibby321 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋