good night
sleep tightly
the sun will come out tommorrow
and the day will bring us joy
but you've got to go to sleep and sing a lullaby
good night
sleep tightly
cause tommorrow will come and the day will get bright
and everything will be white
so good night my child go to sleep again
cause yesterday has come and gone and tommorrow will be the same
hopefully
so good night so sleep tight
2007-01-12 03:32:38 · 13 answers · asked by shanipooh2004 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
She is 17 and she is not racist and she loves to sing and write music and she can play the guitar and piano she sang it to me while playing the guitar its very pretty.
2007-01-12 03:48:19 · update #1
interesting
she should change "everything will be white" to "everything will be alright"
children are quite simple and it's a very simple song so it would be good for a lullaby.
2007-01-12 03:34:52 · answer #1 · answered by Chatty 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I liked everything about it, except the last word Hopefully.
Don't get me wrong, I am all for hope, but how it is place there at the end, it sounds like all of what the writer has written at the beginning, about the good feelings and the high hopes for a bright tomorrow she has lied, and that she is not really sure after all what tomorrow will bring.. unfortunately to me at the end the lullaby sounds defeating..not a good lesson to teach a little one..
2007-01-12 03:42:32 · answer #2 · answered by Mari-Mari 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How does the tune go? The words to a lullaby aren't quite as important as the tune. From what I'm imagining, it seems to work quite well =)
Actually, I'd be a bit wary of:
"the sun will come out tomorrow"
Thats a line from a song from Annie... a very famous one. That line might need to be reworked, cos every time I read that line, I go into the Annie tune, "The sun will come out.... tomorrow.. betcha bottom dollar that tomorrow...." etc.
2007-01-12 03:36:33 · answer #3 · answered by echidna24 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
GREAT!! A few words could be changed. If she sends it in to a magazine she could get $$ There are some out ther like Woman's World etc.
2007-01-12 03:36:30 · answer #4 · answered by rhonda_seiler 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your friend is very talented she should try to make a book of lullabies for kids. and for who ever thinks that the phrase"everything will be white" is racist undoubtly must be too immature to interpet what she was saying.
2007-01-12 03:57:33 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Great tell em they should write a book.
2007-01-12 03:34:57 · answer #6 · answered by elantragod 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not to good to be honest. and why did he say everything will be white. what the hell?
2007-01-12 03:37:26 · answer #7 · answered by blondebb88 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, would sing it to my children if i had any.
2007-01-12 03:38:44 · answer #8 · answered by jade s 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, your friend should copyright it
2007-01-12 03:35:33 · answer #9 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
very sweet,Did she write this for her child?
2007-01-12 03:38:44 · answer #10 · answered by Dawn l 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋