As I start to age in years
I have no fears, I shed no tears
I lived my life, the way it came
It’s all a game, we all have shame
For all of you, I hope you’ll say
That in my day, I smiled your way
For those who are my chosen few
I do love you, you need no clue
So when I see the life I’ve had
I get glad, I get sad
And when I do my final rest
I did my best, for those who jest
For those who shed a tear for me
Eventually, we’re all set free
For my life will never end
You’ll see that when, we meet again
2007-01-12 01:26:27 · 4 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
5, reminds me of Frank Sinatra's song "My Way."
2007-01-12 01:40:26 · answer #1 · answered by Last Ent Wife (RCIA) 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can sense the intention behind the lines.
However I can only say that it still requires fine tuning.
3.
2007-01-12 11:06:48 · answer #2 · answered by Saffren 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a minus zero. I did my best for those who jest? Corny.
2007-01-12 09:30:00 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'll give it a 6.
2007-01-12 09:36:25 · answer #4 · answered by xander 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋