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ok so im doing this assignment where theres a short excerpt from a story. and i need to write a totally different story but using the same format as in the short excerpt.
This is the sentence from the excerpt:

I pulled out the broom and tore out a batch of straws and tossed them into the fire
and watched them smoke, turn black,
blaze, and finally become white wisps of ghosts that vanished.

This is what i have so far:

I picked up the pen and pulled off the cap and laid
the point on the paper
and watched the ink overflow, become black, _______________________________________________.

Please help me find a way to replace those words in the sentence above, and place it in the blank above.

2007-01-11 13:36:07 · 7 answers · asked by . 6 in Education & Reference Words & Wordplay

7 answers

I picked up the pen and pulled off the cap and laid
the point on the paper
and watched the ink overflow, become black,
indelible, and grow into fragile ideas that lived on as words.

Fine, so I'm a bad writer and I strayed from the excerpt...

2007-01-11 13:46:26 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Irony 2 · 1 0

I picked up the pen and pulled off the cap. After dipping the end in the inkwell, I watched the dark drops form a dark puddle on the white paper like a deep, cool pond. I stared and it beckoned me to come and explore the story written beneath its surface.

2007-01-11 13:46:46 · answer #2 · answered by Patricia D 6 · 0 0

cover the paper, and finally become meaningful sentences that would fly off to my sweetheart.

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2007-01-11 13:42:08 · answer #3 · answered by Serendipity 7 · 0 0

And dry into a pool on the parchment.

2007-01-11 13:51:12 · answer #4 · answered by lovely 5 · 0 0

finally became black marks on snow white paper.

2007-01-11 13:47:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 1

sorry, computer won't let me put it in up there. um, what about 'and become words i've never spoken.'

2007-01-11 13:41:10 · answer #6 · answered by lea.mosely21 2 · 0 0

tarnishing all that i know to be true and pure.

2007-01-11 13:41:29 · answer #7 · answered by pa625 5 · 1 0

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