You haven't seen me ,
and i haven;t seen you,
this really does make me feel blue,
but no matter what
I will always love you
even if we don't meet
i don't want this to end
but daniel can't you see
we are ment to beeverything we like are the same
so therer is nothing to blame
there is no one like you
yes this is true
I love to here your voice
it makes me regoice
so remember no matter what i will always love you
2007-01-11 05:08:51 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Honestly, it is clearly a poem but it's very amateur-ish... Good enough for simple everyday messages though...
2007-01-11 05:19:41 · answer #1 · answered by Mafia Agent 4207 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The point is clear, and I don't mean any disrespect, but i'd use more adjectives and imagery. The words are very basic. Try to really put your heart and intense feelings into it to create a "mood".
Good luck with Daniel :)
2007-01-11 13:23:44 · answer #2 · answered by Spontaneous Combustion 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Agreed, if I were Daniel, I'd be very flattered.
2007-01-11 13:23:39 · answer #3 · answered by Snow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It makes me think of me and my crush!
2007-01-11 13:12:54 · answer #4 · answered by Luv Like Winter 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if i was daniel i would love this poem :)
2007-01-11 13:13:39 · answer #5 · answered by Kyo 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋