her name is lauren and i love her so much she means a lot to me! i want to write her sumthin but im not sure how to start it off or amythimg im not good with words but yeah help!
2007-01-11 01:51:15 · 11 answers · asked by yogirl20032002@yahoo.com 1 in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, and Transgender
A poem would be nice, but even better if you express your feelings using your own words.
Best wishes
2007-01-11 01:55:23 · answer #1 · answered by Kedar 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
your hair is like silk, your eyes clear crystal pools, when i look at you, i melt just like milk. i see you in the halls, and i do think you are cool, so lets be friends, to the end of school. Thats about the best i could come up with. you might want to try and change some of the words to make them fit her personality.
2007-01-11 02:54:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Write from the heart read some poetry for inspiration use milkbones way with words but also let it come from your heart she will know otherwise
use this site for inspiration
http://library.lovingyou.com/poetry/
it means so much more if she believes you actually mean the words and not half hitched them or plagarised some one elses efforts
2007-01-11 02:52:14 · answer #3 · answered by shannara 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes, you ARE good with words. It's not going to mean anything to her if someone else says it. It's just not the same. Just sit quietly with pen in hand and paper in front, and let the words come out. Take your time, they will.
2007-01-11 01:57:11 · answer #4 · answered by INDRAG? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see the love shining in your eyes
I wish it were for me
How many nights I've fantasized
Of how we two could be
Dinner for two with candle light
Would be our favorite thing
We'd touch and feel the flame ignite
The thought makes my heart sing
After making love so sweet
You'd hold me, oh so tight
I'd watch as you peacefully sleep
Until the morning light
Please see the love shining in my eyes
And ask me who its for
I'd never cheat or tell you lies
It's YOU that I adore.
2007-01-11 02:36:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your caring smile, Silky soft hair, When you are near, I can only stare. The curve of your lips, Your eyes how they shine, You make it seem so easy, Stealing this heart of mine. Each moment we spend, Each giggle and smile, I hope that you're mine, For a long, long while.
2007-01-11 01:59:47 · answer #6 · answered by Rod Rod Go 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
English bunnies go hippity hop,
then they flop.
But, with you Lauren,
I mean every bit.
Like the French bunnies,
I would like to go,
lickity split!
2007-01-11 02:01:06 · answer #7 · answered by kellring 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
can't u just dedicate her a song?
:)
i have a suggestion:
http://youtube.com/watch?v=JOe8H1XlHO0
ps: if u like the song, i can send it 2 u
just let me know
azure_sign@yahoo.com
good luck!
2007-01-11 02:15:03 · answer #8 · answered by Charlyssie 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ROSES ARE RED
VIOLETS ARE BLUE
A FACE LIKE YOURS
BELONGS IN THE ZOO
2007-01-11 02:00:23 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
i no good at poems, maybe talk about her eyes and silent music in your heart, hugs, keeping her near, i dunno, luck.
2007-01-11 01:55:16 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋