could you rate my poems out of 10?

Question

My friends, the stars....

Look at the stars and the friends in my arms,
Can hardly tell the difference between the two.

Both so beautiful and so free,
Both will always be a part of me.

My feet are on the ground for all to see,
But my heads in the stars so I can be happy.


My man...

Now each day though it’s still sometimes a bore,
You realise you don’t need anything more,
Cause life with him could never be dull even on the darkest of December nights,
He can still light up the fire that’s your life.

And when you hate the fact that he’s not there,
You want him alone,
You don’t want to share,
Suddenly you see you need not care,
Cause of course you know he’ll always be there.

Answer 1

10/10 go find a publisher~

Answer 2

i always applaud anyone who writes because it's a venue i adore..but then you also open yourself up to ratings and sometimes you can't take the criticism you ask for..that said..i would give it a 3

but keep writing..that's how we get better at everything, practice