What do you think of my lyric's?

Question

This is a song I wrote for my husband. He is in the US Navy.


I watched you leave, to become a man,
To protect our world, to make a stand,

And when you came home, I looked into your eye's,
What I saw was a hero, only in disguise,

chorus:
I lay in bed and I dream of you,
Wondering what your doing,
If your thinking of me too,

I dream of the day, when this war will end,
And when you'll come home, but then you'll leave again,

Because this world needs a hero,
And that hero's you,
I just want to thank you,
For helping us make it through,


As our son grows up, he'll be thinking of you,
My Daddy's a hero, someday I will be too,

He'll look into your eye's,
See his hero in disguise,

And we'll be dreaming of you,
Please dream of us too,
Our hero, we love you


Chorus:
We'll lay in bed and dream of you,
Wondering what your doing,
If your thinking of us too,

We'll dream of the day, when this war will end,
And when you'll come home, but then you'll leave again,

Because this world needs a hero,
And that hero's you,
We just want to thank you,
For helping us make it through,

Too our Hero, we love you.

Answer 1

Very deep and lovely song, if i were him i my heart would melt, very good words!

Answer 2

Navy Suck, it's all about the Army and Marines, Combat Units rule!!!!!

Answer 3

I really loved it!

Answer 4

I like it.

Answer 5

AWW, I thought it was sweet!