hey guys of my age! What do you think of this??

Question

My friend & I r planning to make a sci-fi novel & here's the plot.Setting, the year 3000 or so. There r twenty or so planets, each governed by 5 senators, all under the rule of a council w/ 8 members who're the most powerful in the solar system.Now, the members are really bitches and do all sorts of bad things.Then there's this group of 4 people, the quiet handsome one, the leader, the leader's fiancee, and a rich girl (daughter of a senator) who set out to stop this (not sure why, yet) un4tuntely, they had a new member, who happened to be the daughter of 1 of the council (she's a ***** 2) but they don't know it yet. she hanged out with them for a while, and that changed her.But she became their enemy too coz she took the fiancee of the leader and made her an android which she sent to kill them.Sort of like star wars but it's not. it's actually more dramatic, but i dunno how to write it. but the story's close to that, anyway, w/ a complicated love story.

Answer 1

first off, if you dont know how to write it, then you probably shouldnt be trying to write a book.

Second off, based on your grammar and spelling skills, its going to be unreadable.

third, it sounds like a trashy sci fi romance novel. Overall a bad idea.

fourth, your plot sucks based on that description.

sixth, you sound like a sophomore in highschool without the resources, time, knowledge, intelligence, or drive to go through the processes of writing a book.

seventh, if youre not both professional writers with outrageous amounts of experiance (which youre clearly not), you wont be able to co-write a fiction book. Your styles and ideas and tones will be inconsistant and make the book even worse than it sounds like its already going to be, if you write it.

Answer 2

Okay...I'm a guy, so I fit half the criteria you set, but since you don't state your age, I don't know whether I fit the other half. First let me applaud you for your creative spirit. That said, I gotta tell you that your plot has a few holes in it (or maybe they're simply things you left out in your explanation).
Some details to start working out would be: Why the year 3000? Why 20 planets? Why 5 senators? How can a total of 100 senators, be under the rule of 8 people? If the council is doing such bad things, the senators have them outnumberd by more than 10 to 1. If 100 senators can't stand up to these 8 council members, what makes these 4 people think they can do better?
By the way, you can't make an android out of a person. An android is an artificial life form. The best you can do with living beings is turn them into cyborgs. I point this out only to illustrate that before undertaking this venture, you should learn the language of sci-fi.
What you have now is not so much a plot as a platform on which a plot can be built. It sounds like you have a pretty good idea. Have you thought of setting the story in another time and place? Maybe it could work as historical fiction in a land of your own making. Perhaps the combatants could use swords and spears and arrows and the leader's fiancee could be turned against them through magick. The possibilities are limited only by your imaginations.
One final tip: Remove this question post as quickly as possible before another writer sees it and steals your idea! Then, any time you take on a project such as this, keep it private until you can take steps to ensure that it can't be stolen.

Answer 3

i love females round my age, supply or take a pair years. and they could't be less than 21 (I say that because i'm 27), yet i have continually beloved females round my age when you consider that i changed into 15. i imagine it concerns at the same time as a lady is somewhat youthful than I, and maximum of my chum's imagine so too. We get actual aggravated with youthful, immature habit. yet i'm very particular females my age sense the same about youthful adult males to boot.

Answer 4

And your age is ?
We aren't mind readers . . .

Answer 5

you've got a long way to go, darlin'...