Behind the patio sliding doors
The city sounds Expire,
And in her cosy living room,
Nan sits alone. Retired.
The twin electric bar burns one,
Soft the blanket upon her lap,
Her cigarette ascendt to dust
Oblivious she naps.
Yet when her doorbell rings
she's always there
To listen, love and help with aged ear.
- - - - - -
The crematorium entrance hall
Bedecked with wreathes and cards,
The warming sun upon the hearse,
The gardens paved with flowers.
And slow the mourful journey home-
As minutes turn to hours.
Now her doorbell knowone hears
Reverberant on empty ears.
Silent Table, bed and chairs.
2007-01-09 22:33:08 · 16 answers · asked by Spiny Norman 7 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
waaaaaw its pretty beautiful poem , u who wrote it ?
its wonderful
2007-01-09 22:38:50 · answer #1 · answered by micho 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Ah !! I sense great sadness here, your feelings shinning through, you've lost a, Gran I know what your going through. As for you verse it contains all that needs to be said, you must have loved her very much, yes!! your poem brought a tear my eyes as I read it, and reflected on my past sad times
Yes time will heal, I hope it does, but I'm still waiting.
2007-01-11 04:07:38 · answer #2 · answered by bill 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's good, I like it. Did you write it? Just check your spelling and random capital letters before you try to publish it etc.
It's a really touching, heartfelt poem, the writer has talent.
2007-01-09 23:49:25 · answer #3 · answered by clairelou_lane 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Such feeling!!! Presents the picture - I miss my Nan to x
2007-01-12 09:29:23 · answer #4 · answered by SUPER-GLITCH 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh yeah, its the tone that invites one to follow along. Good piece.
2007-01-10 00:48:49 · answer #5 · answered by onelife006 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes I do it's very moving
2007-01-10 00:28:02 · answer #6 · answered by mistymiss 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Like it
2007-01-09 22:40:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes i like it very much. It's lovely.
2007-01-09 22:45:15 · answer #8 · answered by katie 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Absloutly awesome. If you worte it you should be very proud
2007-01-10 08:36:19 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Great and touching
2007-01-09 23:30:33 · answer #10 · answered by lea 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋