Initially this was attributed to the reduced cardiac output, a consequence of impaired ventricular function a sequelae of heart failure pathology.
2007-01-09 21:25:10 · 5 answers · asked by pss4dm 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Impaired ventricular function, a sequelae of heart failure pathology, was initially attributed to the reduced cardiac output. That's how I'd put it.
2007-01-09 21:36:15 · answer #1 · answered by msmaryanne3 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It makes sense up to "impaired ventricular function" but not thereafter
2007-01-09 21:30:41 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Looks fine to me ; maybe there should be a comma after ventricular function.
2007-01-09 21:30:23 · answer #3 · answered by pragyana 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"sequelae' is the plural of "sequela". You can have a sequela but you need at least two sequelae
2007-01-10 00:54:27 · answer #4 · answered by tentofield 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You need a comma after the word "Initiallly," and after the word "function."
2007-01-13 06:57:45 · answer #5 · answered by nova30180 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋