ok this is the chorus to i song im writin and i need feed back
"its so hard luving you,
i wish u could just see,
how much ur hurting me,
i dont have bruses,
i dont have scars,
its just mii heart,
you've torn apart"
and please no one copy this...it took alot of hard work..and maybe one day youll hear this song on the radio and member me!!! (( i plan to be a pro singer one day ))
2007-01-09 12:28:09 · 12 answers · asked by Ashley 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
well this is only the chorus..i already wrote the rest of the song i just didnt want to put it all up cause i didnt kno if people were gonna steal it and i dont want that happinin..and BTW its about mii step dad...we have aLOT of problems!! and i wrote this song after we got into a fight && its exacly how i feel..i might put up some more songs 2night so look out for them!!! thanx EVERYONE who tells me what they think..anykind of feed back helps!!
2007-01-09 12:35:44 · update #1
very good
i know how you feel
my sep dad hates me but acts like he loves me...only in front of my mom, and when i try to tell my mom she is just like "oh bailey, i love him and i thought you wanted whats best for me!"
a song to set the mood for you is "why do you want him" by green day
it's about billie joe's step dad
2007-01-09 13:18:20 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
If you don't want it to be steal then don't post it in such a public forum, you know there are a lot of weirdos out there, seeking stuff for free
2007-01-09 20:37:05 · answer #2 · answered by Lil' Gay Monster 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think this could be a great song!!!! it's seems you've really put your heart into this and i will remember u when i hear it! Have you come up with a title yet....? when you do let me know what it is okay..?
2007-01-09 20:33:50 · answer #3 · answered by Breanna 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OTHER PEOPLE MIGHT NOT LIKE IT.BUT IT SOUNDS PRETTY DARN GOOD TO ME!BUT ITS WHATEVER ALL
U HAVE TO DO IS FOLLOW YOUR HEART!SO I REALLY
ENCOURAGE U TO KEEP THIS SONG GOING I HOPE IT
DOES GET ON THE RADIO SOMEDAY I'M GOING TO BE
LISTENING JUST TO SEE IF YOUR SONG IS PLAYING ON THE RADIO HALO AT YOUR GIRL BRIA S
2007-01-09 20:38:39 · answer #4 · answered by bria s 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually that is excellent! It depends on what kind of style it is but try new things! wish i could write like that...
2007-01-09 20:33:08 · answer #5 · answered by chikoo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very awsome, depending on what style your going for ,but yes very awsome
2007-01-09 20:39:15 · answer #6 · answered by my_joyless_romance 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
not really but at least your getting there add some background music or guitars and bass and drums
2007-01-09 20:38:02 · answer #7 · answered by morrisonfan010 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me!!
You are right, don't post all of it SOMEONE WILL STEAL IT!!
good luck in your career!!
2007-01-09 20:52:17 · answer #8 · answered by Mee-OW =^..^= 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think its good keep going with the song writing
2007-01-09 20:32:13 · answer #9 · answered by »-(¯`v´¯)-» BLAH くろ 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
cool
2007-01-09 20:36:01 · answer #10 · answered by Uchihaitachi345 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋