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As I got the Province Saskatchewan to talk about, I thought that I would first give you the general information about this province. Saskatchewan is one of the provinces in Canada. Saskatchewan got it name from the Eree Indian word “Kisiskatchewan”, which means “swiftly flowing” a tearm first applied to the Saskatchewan River. The area of the province is 651 900 Km2. According to the 2006 data, the population of this province is 985 386. Even though the capital city of Saskatchewan is Regina, the largest city is Saskatoon. The motto of the province is “ Maltis E Gantibus Vires”, which means “From many peoples strength “. Saskatchewan is known as “Canada’s Bread Basket” with 40% of Canada’s farm kind. This province is the main producer of Uranium in the world, and it is the largest Potash Mine in the world. And that gives a period for my general information about Saskatchewan.

To give more information, let me talk about the Economy and the products in Saskatchewan. To begin with, I’ll talk about the most important natural resources: Natural gas and oil. The province of Saskatchewan is the third largest natural gas producing province in Canada. The main areas and reserves are along the western border in the Beacon Hill, Kindersley and Hatton areas. In the year 2000 there were over 10,000 gas wells in the province. Saskatchewan is the second largest oil producing province in Canada, where Alberta takes the first place. Saskatchewan is called “Canada’s Bread Basket” for its Successful farms. The most popular food grown in these farms are: wheat, flax, canary seed, oats, canola, rye, barley, peas and lentils, mustard, sunflowers and wild rice. The economy of the province associated with agriculture, where forestry, fishing, hunting and farming takes the lead.

Now let me talk about my next topic, tourism and the attractions in the province. As every one knows, Saskatchewan is famous for “The River Saskatchewan”, a big gift from Mother Nature. To list some other famous places, I would begin with the other two major rivers in Saskatchewan which are: The Qu’Appelle and Churchill River. The beautiful Nistwiak falls tells us the natural beauty of the province. When taking about the places to visit we can’t forget about Arts and the museums. RCMP Centennial Museum and The Royal Saskatchewan Museum gives good examples for great museums in the province. Religious attraction makes people think about the things god gave us. Saskatchewan shows its religious attraction from: the beautiful dome of St. Mary’s Ukrainian Catholic Church, the simple grace of the Holy Trinity Angelica Church, and the painting in Our Lady of Co-cathedral in Grover Bourg.

If I visit this province some day I wouldn’t forget to visit the River Saskatchewan, because it is one of the major rivers in Canada, which is approximately 550km long.
Provinces like Saskatchewan are gifts for us from Mother Nature, and protecting these Natural gifts are up to us.

Answer 1

As I got the Province Saskatchewan to talk about, I .. first give you general information about this province. .. It is one of the [ how many? ] provinces in Canada. Saskatchewan got itS name from the Eree Indian word, “Kisiskatchewan.” That means “swiftly flowing” a term first applied to the Saskatchewan River. The overall land area .. is 651 900 Km2. According to 2006 data [ from - ], the population is 985 386. The capital city of Saskatchewan is Regina, the largest city is Saskatoon. The motto of the province is, “Maltis E Gantibus Vires.” That means “From many peoples strength.“ Saskatchewan is known as “Canada’s Bread Basket” with 40% of farm kind. The province is the main producer of Uranium in the world! It has the largest Potash Mine in the world. That gives .. general information about Saskatchewan.

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Let me talk about the Saskatchewan's Economy and products. The most important natural resources are: Natural gas and oil. The province is Canada's third largest natural gas produce. The main areas and reserves are in the Beacon Hill, Kindersley and Hatton areas along the western border. In 2000 there were over 10,000 gas wells in the province. Saskatchewan is the second largest oil producing province in Canada. Alberta takes the first place. It's .. called “Canada’s Bread Basket” for its Successful farms. The most popular food grown on the farms are: wheat, flax, canary seed, oats, canola, rye, barley, peas and lentils, mustard, sunflowers and wild rice. The economy is of course, agricultural. Forestry, fishing, hunting and farming are the leading industries.

My next topic, is tourism and the attractions in the province. Saskatchewan is famous for the “River Saskatchewan.” Some famous places, include two major rivers: The Qu’Appelle and Churchill Rivers. Beautiful Nistwiak falls is a natural attraction of the province. When taLking about places to visit don’t forget about Arts and the museums. RCMP Centennial Museum and The Royal Saskatchewan Museum are great museums. People think about religion and what god gave us. Saskatchewan shows its religious attraction from The beautiful dome of St. Mary’s Ukrainian Catholic Church. The grace of the Holy Trinity Angelica Church, and the painting in Our Lady of Co-cathedral in Grover Bourg.

If I visit this province some day I wouldn’t forget to visit the River Saskatchewan, because it is one of the major rivers in Canada, which is approximately 550km long.
Provinces like Saskatchewan are gifts for us, and protecting these Natural gifts are up to us.

Answer 2

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I was instructed to write about the Province Saskatchewan and give some general information concerning it. Saskatchewan is one of the Providence's in Canada who got its name from the Erie Indian word, "Kisiskatchewan meaning, "swiftly flowing". The term applies to the Saskatchewan River. The area of the providence is 651,900 km2, and according to the 2006 data, the population of the province is 985,386. The motto of the province is "Maltis E Gantibus Vires", meaning "from many peoples strength". Within the providence is the capital city Regina but the largest is Saskatoon. Saskatchewan's reputation leaves us to believe it's "Canada's Bread Basket" with 40% of Canada's farm kind. The province is also the main producer of Uranium in the world as well as the largest Potash Mine. Thus concluding the general information about Saskatchewan.

Answer 3

Saskatchewan is one of the provinces in Canada. Saskatchewan got its name from the Eree Indian word “Kisiskatchewan”, which means “swiftly flowing”, a tearm first applied to the Saskatchewan River. The area of the province is 651 900 square kilometers. According to the 2006 data, the population of Saskatchewan is 985 386. Even though the capital city of Saskatchewan is Regina, the largest city is Saskatoon.

The motto of the province is “ Maltis E Gantibus Vires”, which means “From many peoples strength “. Saskatchewan is known as “Canada’s Bread Basket” with 40% of Canada’s farmland. Saskatchewan is also the main producer of Uranium in the world, and it contains the largest Potash Mine as well.

Answer 4

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