Every Morning I wake up to find no coffee in my cup.
Makes me ma--d
Makes me sa--d
To know that I can't make...
Enough money for my family
Enough money for my life to live
Enough money for my children to run free.
And it makes me ma--d
And it makes me sa--d
To see this world that we're living in
Turning upside down
Everyone wants money
It's not that funny
Everyone's so greedy
Don't care about the needy
Some are filthy rich
Some are downright poor
And some are living in a ditch
Most are homeless
Or have no place to go
No family left
No one who loves them so
It just makes me ma--d
And it just makes me sa--d
To know I can't see my country or the world...
Carefree
No one will ever see the world live happily
No one will ever see the world end up in world peace
No one
No one
And so it makes me ma--d
And it makes me sa--d
To know the world can never end up free
In world peace.
2007-01-09 09:10:25 · 16 answers · asked by Jess 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
I like it, but it makes be sad too.
2007-01-09 09:17:58 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the lyrics. It says it like it is.
How bout the music? Can you write that too?
You should submit it to one of those Song Writing contests advertised in the Sunday Paper Parade Magazine.
2007-01-09 09:19:57 · answer #2 · answered by MELANIE 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Without music, hard to follow to its best point...but! I think I like it....!..except the very last 2 line's....its been done to death...so it takes away YOUR signature!
Yes I do like it....but drop the 2.....L/L's
2007-01-09 09:18:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! That is fantastic! I really like the lyrics but I don't know what the tune is!
2007-01-09 09:14:53 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
lyrics seem fine but it's really all dependant on the music! good lyrics can really go to waste if they're not to a good tune.
2007-01-09 09:14:56 · answer #5 · answered by HansonFan 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's good. it just depends on the music that goes with it. i dont think you could be a record deal with that song though. sorry. keep up the good work. :)
2007-01-10 01:50:11 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
that song is tight maybe if you keep pushing fourth on it and it get on the radio i'll be the one to say i saw and heard that song first *****!!
2007-01-09 09:23:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hmm...I'm kinda harsh on con-crit so...it's too cliche I think and I think you are forcing yourself to make the lines rhyme...not everything rhymes so mix it up a little....but um try using metaphors, similes, or personification to make it more interesting hope I helped
2007-01-09 09:17:38 · answer #8 · answered by taixsantixlove 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
**** that is great!!! it takes everything that is going on right now and sums it up be carfulll you dont want anyone to copy this so copyright it!@!!!!!
2007-01-09 09:17:20 · answer #9 · answered by brebz 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it a great song keep up the good work.
2007-01-09 09:14:53 · answer #10 · answered by mattie B 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋