What do you think of this poem? Last Breath?

Question

My final breath

Looking from my window view;
I know my time is up I’m cool
Cease like a snail I do
Not afraid to do die like you
I wish this all away
To be with you this last day
We’re crucified my friend
I love you Jesus, hold my hand
You’ve lifted me up all these years
Accepted me when I was gay
Damn I feel so ******* cold… so numb
Soldiers with angry faces
Laughing, throwing rocks at us
Why does it have to end?
Oh well, life is short right Jesus?
I see that you’re not answering me
You don’t have to… I still love you
Let them execute us…Let them!!!
My eyes bleed to justify my manners
They pierce our tangible skins
No mercy is shown, pain is inevitable
Buddha feel our tranquillity, while you watch us above.
I remembered you talking to Jesus
About peace in the world before you died.
He was just a sweet child at the time
I grew up with him, and he had his reasons
I know that nothing pleased him
He’s like you and I, don’t you see it?
I watch the spear thrown…Ack!!!
I grabbed the handle with all my strength
Pulled…Pulled…Pulled…I’m not…ugh.
Jesus saw my pale blue flesh dangling
I remembered hearing his sweet voice

“Brother, I will die for you, damn these fools. I got to admit though, they are unique and special under my eyes… remember we played with them when we were kids, Buddha was picked on the most because he was to spiritual..hahaha it was so real. Good times, but then we grow old, and hate was set in their hearts… I forgive these fools, and I forgive you no matter how sinful you were… let’s rest in Peace, this was meant to be.”

Answer 1

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