Sadly in this modern world we live in, TV addicts make the world a much better place.
A nice Math formula I made up.
TV Addict + Remote Control * DVR - Reading = Obsessed Junkie
Take the square root of an obsessed Junkie that equals no life.
I’ll go inside the mind of what this machine is really thinking about all of us
TV Monster
I am the TV because addicts thrill me
I am one face, I am the poison
In your tea, and redden your eyes
I’ll kiss you goodbye
Watching your human soul
Stubble and die
Vicariously much better you than I
Sadly you’re not tuning me out
Staring at me like a Junkie
How annoying, but I love it
Counting towards an endless time
Society likes to blame me for sure
Why does this story go?
I’m the greatest thing on Earth
Why does this story fold?
We don’t give pause for mindless drones
I love to watch things rot, from a safest distance
Books are responsible for wars; I hate them
The universe is hostile
So impossible
Devour to survive
So it is, so it's always been ...
We all feed on tragedy
It's like blood to a vampire
Vicariously, I
Live while the whole world dies
Much better you than I.
2007-01-09 04:32:31 · 7 answers · asked by Randy S 3 in Society & Culture ➔ Other - Society & Culture
You make me feel so bad i have no control. I should put my computer off too. Why cant I ? Why oh Why!!!!
2007-01-09 04:42:34 · answer #1 · answered by I want to delete my answers account 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have a very open mind and have a gift of expression and can explain ure words through poetry in a way we all can fully understand. Many will argue with the facts mentioned in the poem but change it for nobody ok. Even though its magnificent and generous of you to share this with the people of the world through the internet, some may steal this poem and publish it as theyre own. Is this ok with you? I wont do it, but some may.
Do what i did...write them ALL down. Every one of ure poems and look after them. I wrote my first poem when i was 8yrs old and since then, have written 140 poems. I never put them on the internet but i am going to give you two lines of my favourite one i wrote, simply as thanks for sharing ure one with me.
" And look above, into the pale moonlight,
To the whispered promices in the heavens breeze".
Just for you mate,
Take care and well done. NEVER stop writing, no matter what anyone may say to make you stop. My best advice.
2007-01-09 04:46:07 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not inevitably ought to rhyme however it needs to hit my thoughts. i imagine readability of expression is substantial to boot. i do not favor to 2d guess what i'm studying about. I continually search for what I time period "poetic gemstones"contained in the textual content.
2016-12-02 01:20:46 · answer #3 · answered by huehn 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo! So true; very nice indeed.
2007-01-09 04:38:30 · answer #4 · answered by Xam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it is soooooo nice
2007-01-09 04:37:16 · answer #5 · answered by angel 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow that is so true i never thought about it like that ,thanks for the insight,and a new view on life thanks again
2007-01-09 04:39:31 · answer #6 · answered by ann p 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
o.k
2007-01-09 04:39:00 · answer #7 · answered by free4jackie 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋