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My Selves

We’ll forget in time
the true deception
of appearance
when silver light dangled
under a secret sky.
Footprints of my former self
washed away
reflections of myself,
known only to myself.
Will I wake some morning
with the daylight of trust
filling til I feel fulfilled
with no mountains
mothering me in their breasts?
In a dream,
I’d awaken with poetry
pouring out of my pores
and never ask for more.
In this reality,
the rain of truth
makes my face cold
and a thousand lovers
cannot warm me.
I trace the difference
between trust and truth.
From the unborn pink sky,
sun slips away
into my eyes.
Misleading weather
turns to deliver tears,
mourning moments
murdered by caution.
For conscious thought cannot
coexist with emotion.
Only the strongest strands
strung together
stay to become our strength.

2007-01-09 02:28:13 · 3 answers · asked by rhiannon_kc 1 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

3 answers

Cognitive dissonance. Believing one way and acting another.

This is a wonderful poem. But be careful. If you've written it you need to copywrite it before putting it on the internet. Now everyone has it and there's nothing to prove that you've written it.
That being said, you have a great talent and should do whatever you can (within reason) to be published.

A cheap and easy way to copywrite a poem is to mail it to yourself and never open it until it's authorship comes into question.

2007-01-09 02:41:22 · answer #1 · answered by comet girl...DUCK! 6 · 0 0

The poem is with regard to the interconnectedness of being: the comparable existence interior the poet's bloodstream is to be cutting-edge in starting to be issues, interior the rhythms of the sea (which themselves reflect the rhythms of existence and death), and interior the historic past of existence in the international (this is the meaning of the final 2 traces). Technically, the poem is written in unrhymed unfastened verse. The word 'existence' is utilized in each stanza as properly simply by fact the call, indicating the centrality of the belief, and the subject of rhythm is in a matching way repeated throughout.

2016-10-30 10:28:55 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

that's amazing-
*i think of my "born again" experience - becoming a chrisitan
"footprints of my former self washed away "

"wake in the morning qwith daylight of trust"
*All you reallly have is the trust of Jesus

"poetry pouring out of my pours never to ask for more "
*This sounds like the shakaniah Glory of God that you carry as you walk a pure christian life

"i trace the difference b/w trust and truth"
* we live by faith not by sight


God bless you

2007-01-09 02:42:45 · answer #3 · answered by Toni C *prayer is the answer 2 · 0 0

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