i just posted it on my 360 blog this morning!
here it is:
When you are all alone and lonely
With nothing at all foreseen
There is nothing better to for company
Than the Internet, coffee & nicotine
While sitting at my desk
There are loads of things to do
I can spend hours on youtube
Or update my profile on yahoo
While sipping scalding coffee
And coughing from the smokes
I check out tonight’s television line-up
Then laugh at some funny jokes
I post in all my forums
Read through all my email
Grab my purse & master card
Vicky’s Secret, huge sale
While reading national news
Classmates.com popped up
I am running out of cigarettes
And there are ashes in my coffee cup
Ok, I’m tired of the Internet
My fingers are cramped and butt’s numb
I need to find the remote, lay on the couch
Alone today, I can be a lazy bum!
well.......... what do you think?????
2007-01-08 23:27:08 · 14 answers · asked by Cap'n Donna 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
wow.. thanks... my head just swelled to 3x's its normal size
2007-01-08 23:56:50 · update #1
Wonderful! Do you realize you have captured your generation in that poem? Maybe a few of them of the high techies. I'd tell you to get it published in Reader's Digest...but you know how everyone is so anti smoking and all. Check out Rolling Stones or one as revolutionary as they are. Yours is the best poem I've read on Yahoo to date. No kidding...you got talent kid. It's so a la Jack Kerouac/Alan Ginsberg beat. Good luck with your earthy/wordy talent. And thanx, I enjoyed it.
Psst! Check out "Howl" by Ginsberg.
Do share more of them with us...and save your responses for your Bio. You just never know....
2007-01-08 23:39:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
you could set that to the tune of the song "when Im down and lonely" found myself humming it as i read it
2007-01-08 23:33:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Long but interesting. Oh and full of emotion. Not too bad.
2007-01-08 23:30:17 · answer #3 · answered by cats 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
lol thats really clever and everyone can relate to it.. haha write some more ur pretty good
2007-01-08 23:32:50 · answer #4 · answered by filthy gorgeous 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice!
2007-01-08 23:30:27 · answer #5 · answered by v 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
its nice there's rhythm in it read it twice...quite true too describes one of my many boring days cept i dont smoke =)
why doesnt anybody like mine ? =x
2007-01-08 23:37:01 · answer #6 · answered by igottanoe 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
To long.
2007-01-08 23:32:43 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Now THAT is a poem.
2007-01-08 23:32:53 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
damn girl, you really can rythme and write stuff huh??
2007-01-09 00:21:40 · answer #9 · answered by LeRoy 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
you rock
2007-01-08 23:45:07 · answer #10 · answered by me 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋