I hate the way I still care
For a person vigilant to nuances, I never saw it coming
Your absence to me was just you not being there
I didn’t realize that it was your way to promulgate your goodbye
Because I trusted you enough to believe your lies
And I hate myself for missing you
And I loathe that in a way I’ve forgiven you
I fabricate this lie and say that I am alright
But inside me I struggle
Trying to find a way to repudiate this pain
I am a plethora of emotions, As I have always been
I warned you to be careful
My cold heart’s more fragile than you think
And you just smiled and said, You think you can handle it
It makes me ache to think, That you didn’t even mean it
I am so tired of hurting, I refuse it all
You’re the first who ever saw through me
I don’t think I can take this anymore
But I guess all I have is Hobson’s choice - To have no choice at all
2007-01-08 23:04:10 · 9 answers · asked by Jaded 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
And I do have to thank you for one thing
Before you, I never knew the depths of my own heart
So thank you for the pain, It’s been my awakening
Cuz I know better now than to ever let anyone in
People always hurt you, And people always leave
So thank you for the lesson, Thank you for the pain
Here’s my incongruous gratitude
The unintentional scars you left are not in vain.
2007-01-08 23:04:20 · update #1
Hey CIA-Spy, great poem, it would make a really good song too. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing. =))
2007-01-09 05:16:55 · update #2
your song is amazing, it's deep and so true...
i find myself in it, feel just the same way
2007-01-08 23:12:56 · answer #1 · answered by hilarie 1710 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What do you think of mine?.
Its the feast of the blood with sin
Unleash the beast within
I walk around with the strenght of 100 men
You besta run before i count to ten
Blood drippin from my k9 like a fountan pen
It seems that ive been asleep for 1000 years
The way my world has changed it bring me 1000 tears
Prince of darkness that walks through the rays of light
To this beat of empire of the portal type
The shape shifter mirrior image flash photo type
The ever lastin indiginal red blato type
(He is born perfect and just like the great white shark,
This guy has never had to evolve)
Daywalker
I stike back with avengence
The father of decendents
And i cant be deflected by your silver cross pendents
Blow the holy water you make the false images
Must wait for the signal ahhhh your life damenishes
Sing like the scorpian
Strike with the force of ten
My blood is going to revatilize the corpse of men
And the last thing they said the dead would walk again
The blind, deaf and dumb will talk again
2007-01-09 07:09:16 · answer #2 · answered by Speed Limit - 100 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Pretentious
2007-01-09 07:10:23 · answer #3 · answered by Bagpuss 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deeply emotional and thought provoking. Touching.
2007-01-09 07:09:10 · answer #4 · answered by cats 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I THINK THAT YOU HAVE REALLY BEEN HURT. THAT YOU HAVE A GOOD WAY TO EXPRESS YOUR FEELINGS. YOUR VOCABULARY IS RICH. YOU DO WELL WITH PUTTING WORDS INTO PAPER.
2007-01-09 07:09:46 · answer #5 · answered by Stella 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you stole that from don juan
2007-01-09 07:08:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Deep....it's good though. I'll read it again.
2007-01-09 07:08:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it, i felt like that once.
2007-01-09 07:16:27 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
good one!! well done...
2007-01-09 07:08:47 · answer #9 · answered by Andy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋