I'm putting a resume together....under Objective I wrote:
Seeking a position with the Department of Public Social Services where I can make a difference for each individual by providing excellent customer service and achieving a positive outcome.
Any corrections that you can think of let me know please Thanks
2007-01-08 13:46:30 · 3 answers · asked by Yvette 2 in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
Probably want to break it up a bit. Here are some options...
Seeking a position with the Department of Public Social Services. I (would like to) make a difference for each individual by providing excellent customer service and achieving a positive outcome.
(I am) seeking a position with the Department of Public Social Services. (By) providing excellent customer service and (working toward) positive outcome(s), I (hope to assist in) making a difference for individual clients.
Hope that helps.
2007-01-08 14:04:58 · answer #1 · answered by five v 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm looking for a
position with the Department of Public Social Services where I can make a difference in people's lives.
2007-01-08 21:54:58 · answer #2 · answered by sushimaven 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope you've outlined what you can change and achieve. It sounds good but I would want to know what your ideals or solutions are..what can you change, what are some solutions you would use..do you have any experiences?
2007-01-08 21:54:34 · answer #3 · answered by Betty Boop 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋