i wrote a free-verse poem, like some people suggested for me to do than struggling for my poem to rhyme...
what do you think of this poem?
Life is a road we take
You start from the beginning
Not knowing where the road ends
You'll come to a road that's bumpy
The other one smooth...
You'll be confused which way t go...
No matter whta you do though,
You'll be hurt too
Take life as it goes...
Keep going ang going...
Once you've reach the end,
Ask yourself this:
Was my life worth living?
2007-01-08 02:26:24 · 6 answers · asked by gek_meisje05 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
This is a good first attempt…a starting point for this poem. You can spice it up a bit with metaphors or similes: describe the conditions of the roads beyond bumpy and smooth. Ending with the rhetorical question keeps the poem alive in the reader’s mind.
2007-01-08 05:03:49 · answer #1 · answered by Maddog Salamander 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It doesn't inevitably could rhyme in spite of the undeniable fact that it needs to hit my thoughts. i imagine readability of expression is significant besides. i do not pick to second wager what i'm analyzing about. I continuously seem for what I time period "poetic gemstones"contained in the textual content.
2016-12-28 09:38:26 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
it sounds cool. should sound cooler if you pause before the final line but you probabbly knew that
2007-01-08 02:33:50 · answer #3 · answered by janus 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its ok
2007-01-08 02:29:00 · answer #4 · answered by kindkayeye/im a chick 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
OK
2007-01-08 02:35:22 · answer #5 · answered by Crash 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
SH!T hot!
2007-01-08 02:28:48 · answer #6 · answered by spazticus_autisticus 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋