Where can I find some good sample "statement of purpose" essays for Graduate School?

Question

I need some samples I can use as a reference point before I start writting. Is there a website for this? I am applying to a science program, so if there are any pertaining to this that would be good. NOT INTENDED FOR PLAGERISM!!

Answer 1

It is unlikely that you will find such a site, since students' statements of purpose are confidential. It is possible that some students will post their own statement on their personal website, but they would not have access to any others.

The purpose of the statement of purpose/letter of intent is to convince the graduate admissions committee that you are an excellent candidate for admission to THAT program.

Here's what you should include:
(And it does not matter in what order. Just make sure your narrative makes sense.)

Your academic interests, and how your academic background suits you for further study of these interests. Be as specific as you possibly can, showing your familiarity with current theory and method in your intended area of study. Delineate your goals, too. (Do you intend to become a professor? a researcher? Do you want to work for an NGO or a nonprofit? Say so.)

If there are blemishes on your record, explain them. For example, if you were working 30 hours a week as an undergrad, this might help the committee understand a less-than-perfect GPA.

Be sure to include any information about you that cannot be found on your undergraduate transcripts (like awards, special projects you did, work experience related to your field of study, etc.)

Articulate your reasons for choosing THIS particular program. Show familiarity with the faculty and their fields of specialization. Don't just list the faculty - specify with whom you'd like to work and why.

Mention your desire to be considered for teaching assistantships, research assistantships, or fellowships. But only briefly. Like once.

And for goodness sake, proofread. Statements/essays with spelling or grammatical errors go directly to the bottom of the pile.

Best wishes to you!

Answer 2

There are a few books that have samples of SOPs, although Prof. X gave you good advice about what schools look for.

That said, there's a Graduate Admissions Essays by Donald Asher that I thought was pretty good. Then again, I'm not a grad student so you should make an effort to find it in a library and bookstore to see if that's what you're looking for.

Good luck!