I am writing a story on line called Alondra Melody Anderson-Knowles: the second comming , some of you may know it but for thse who dont ; it's about a girl who is sixteen and has a baby named Alondra Melody and a boyfriend named Curtis.
So far, they are having a good realtionship and are close and Alondra is the one bringing them together even though they are already really close.
They go on vacation in Hawaii and are intimate there one time , the next day her legs are hurting like crazy , but she is managing.
They go swimming in the ocean and Curtis' sister Curstianna (a name I really like) is swimming and she gets bitten by a shark, and she loses so much blood and engery and hits her head on the way. Curtis alerts a lifeguard and she is taken to a hospital.
She has to get the leg amupated cause their is nothing she can do with it, if she keeps it. When she finally is concious again, she cant remeber a thing and they are told to enjoy the rest of the day. What should I add?
2007-01-08 00:38:28 · 1 answers · asked by --; cookie. 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
No, the main character and Curstianna's sister are told to go since they cant do anything more.
2007-01-09 03:14:37 · update #1
They just let her go even though she just had her leg amputated and she cant remember anything? Maybe have her disgnosed with something from the shark attack. Maybe it should be about how her boyfriend's sturggle to deal with her new mental state even though he loves her.
2007-01-08 08:46:43 · answer #1 · answered by bluecolouredflames 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋