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I am writing a story about a girl that lives in England in the year 1901. Her mom sends her to America with her three sisters, ages 13, 6, and1, for better lives because they are VERY poor. (She is fifteen.) Her father and two brothers both died from a cholera outbreak one year before. On the way to America she meets a boy named John Covington, who is seventeen, and they both get married. That is all I have gotten to so far. Would you be interested in a story like that? I am just getting opinions. Please answer truthfully.

2007-01-07 12:01:25 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Pregnancy & Parenting Adolescent

This is supposed for teens and adults.

2007-01-07 12:06:48 · update #1

This summary is definantly NOT in detail AT ALL! Lol!

2007-01-07 12:16:36 · update #2

13 answers

Ya, I would totally read it! It sound very adventurous, dramatic and I hope you'll add a happy ending!
Hope this helped:)

2007-01-07 12:06:31 · answer #1 · answered by CrazyGirlinaMessedUpWorld 2 · 0 0

Personally, not me, I'm more into fantasy, but i think it's a promising idea, me being a teen and having written some things, i think you have a good idea there. I think many people would like that story though. If you ever finish it, email it to me, i could give you advice if you would like.

2007-01-07 20:38:26 · answer #2 · answered by eman43093 1 · 0 0

not really. no sorry. try adding something creative like..they move to a BIG city and how the oldest sister gets a job to have her sisters survive..and later gets them married...and this story can be about her life, how she makes so many sacrafices..but life treats her real bad. or some sheit like that. what do u think?

2007-01-07 20:14:53 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Yes

-Fredo

2007-01-07 20:04:43 · answer #4 · answered by Alaina 4 · 0 0

If you can write a story for teens, you could have a winner.

2007-01-07 20:05:48 · answer #5 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0 0

if i found out about it (ad, tv, friends, ect...) i would DEFINATLY buy it and read it, on the other hand if i were browsing i most likely would not buy it. sry u asked 4 the truth...

its just i'm hooked on trashy teen novels

2007-01-07 20:41:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

nice story line will definitely buy the book

2007-01-07 20:06:42 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Sounds interesting to me let me know when its finished!

2007-01-07 23:34:24 · answer #8 · answered by Moms Pretty little Princess 3 · 0 0

yeah iam begin serios that leaves a cliffhanger

2007-01-10 19:02:06 · answer #9 · answered by alex3kent 1 · 0 0

Yes I would.

2007-01-07 20:25:52 · answer #10 · answered by robedzombiesoul 4 · 0 0

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