so the jungle adventrua whos name is maldu mao - means captain coragous that is in the jungle just entered it and collected the golden eyed statue and .....
the malowi tribe spots him and he dashes into a underground cave and he falls in 400 ft deep then a bolder drops and he runs so fast he doges 10 spikes 2 chpooing blades and a massive cave spider then he gets to a clearing and says the words ( ewqojdycb djfyb = open up thou eyes of golden then the statue says you have been given the gift of life .
so he escapes the caves and runs back to the town and saves the people that have been captured by the evil master volxus who is very evil but the adventura saves the day and the evil master dies and all is saved ( THE END )
2007-01-07 10:10:39 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
as for rich z and peekey i dnt need ur stupid dumb advice ( its my poem and my way or writing it ) and if u dnt like that email me and il have a fight with u too cuz in 2001 i won a poem contest ) so that makes rich z and peekey dum
2007-01-07 10:31:04 · update #1
poems generally rhyme and have some kind of punctuation somewhere in the 149 badly spelt 'words' - stop to take a breath.
EDIT:
if you don't want people to respond to it why did you posting it?
who needs a 'fight' when i'm still waiting of you coming through with your limp threat to hack me?
i have to say though that there is a marked difference in the poems by edgar allan poe and anne bronte you posted previously saying you'd written them, and this masterpiece.
for the record, this post is not a question and violates the yahoo! answers community guidelines, so work that one out brainbox...
2007-01-07 10:28:20 · answer #1 · answered by piquet 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Now that you have ended it, you should have time to go back and catch up on spelling and grammar lessons. If you want to explore math and practice large numbers, you could even go back and try to count the errors. I spotted about 25 in spelling and grammar on one quick pass.
2007-01-07 18:16:35 · answer #2 · answered by Rich Z 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Your profile says you have a 'flur' for poetry. Its flair by the way. Whats your question? Your spelling is atrocious! Think you should use your spell check from now on.
2007-01-08 15:50:28 · answer #3 · answered by Wings 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋