let me know which one of these writings should i send in to a contest. stone step stairs or bye now
Stone Step Stairs
The leaves are falling from their tree
The sun has gone and it's hard to see
The wind has finally caught up to me
The angels are now circling down on me
They say it's better if I close my eyes
I know they wouldn't tell me any lies
So I ask them why were they here
They point to the golden gate and disappear
I make my way to the gate only to find it locked
I try to break in but everything is blocked
This can't be how it's suppose to be
The angles never gave me the golden key
I keep telling myself to hold strong as I fight my tears
There is nowhere to go now but down the stone step stairs
I make my way to the bottom only to come face to face eye to eye
With my innermost darkest demon waiting for me inside
2007-01-07 06:17:06 · 11 answers · asked by Ct_noicS 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Bye Now
People come and go
And I guess I'll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of the things we became
It finally got to my head
Of where I should be instead
So here I am letting go of your hand
And I hope you'll understand
Trust me I know it's kind of sad
To give up on the things we had
But hey maybe it's for the best
This way my heart has a chance to rest
You can't say you didn't know
I've always been there to let it show
But hey I'm going to go now
Maybe I'll see you around now
2007-01-07 06:18:02 · update #1
Neither, they are now published and will be disqualified!
2007-01-07 06:20:57 · answer #1 · answered by ♥Pretty♥ ♥Kitty♥ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Both of your poems are awesome and if I could I'd pick them both. But I choose Stone Step Stairs as the best. It is very good and you are a great writer. I want to be a writer but I am not as good as you are. Well which ever one you choose good luck in the contest and I hope you win! Let me know how it goes :)
2007-01-07 14:23:46 · answer #2 · answered by Nina 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second one
2007-01-07 14:21:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first one.
2007-01-07 14:20:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really like both of them, so enter one now and save the other
for a later time.
2007-01-07 14:22:37 · answer #5 · answered by nemesis 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like them both but i liked the second one better!
2007-01-07 14:23:28 · answer #6 · answered by Becky<3 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the first one the second one is kinda cheesy!!! Good luck on your pick!!!and Have a great week!!!!!
2007-01-07 14:23:26 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second one !!!
2007-01-07 14:19:30 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The 2nd one is better
2007-01-07 14:19:40 · answer #9 · answered by Moose 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
they're both very good, but i like the second one better
2007-01-07 14:22:22 · answer #10 · answered by BeautifulDevil 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋