Broken heart agian
another lesson learned better know your friends or else you will get burned you can count on me cause I will garrent that Ill be fine.no more pain no more pain no more lies no more lies no more tears no more tears no I wont cry I wont cry.I walk on past the snowy winter scean I cant cry no more so I just think the moment I think of you my body jumps with fear but Im okno more pain no more pain no more lies no more lies no more tears no more tears no I wont cry I wont cry(the beginning of this song is a REAl song it was in the movie hunny but the part that says no more tears thats when I started writing.Do you like it?oh also the part where it says the words agian is just an echo
2007-01-07 05:09:25 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Celebrities
what kind of question is this?
2007-01-07 05:16:36 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the beginning of this song is a real song...good for you to give credit where credit is due- to start... now, the second half of this song is a real song, too! give yourself that credit!...
but, it seems as though you have more to say...keep writing the lyrics, keep working it until you are really through. Then, break it down and write it in a lyrical or poetic form and use your spell check tool or a dictionary. it will be better for all who will read or eventually, sing your song. keep writing...and best wishes.
2007-01-07 13:43:30 · answer #2 · answered by MARY V 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ya i like it the song is good.
2007-01-07 13:11:55 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
yeah what kind of question is this
2007-01-07 13:21:51 · answer #4 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋