BESIDE SPELLING AND HOW DO I MAKE IT A SONG
HOW CHANGES SHOULD I MAKE
jefferson was the greatest guy
he wanted to expand the cray (cray mean country in polish )
we found a french LAND
which was lousinia territory
that wad in december 1803
and bonaparte todally agreed
jefferson us govRNER
he put the money right over there
15 million $ wasn't that mush
so we bouhgt lousina
which made us rich
land, farm shipping and money
let us have lots of honey
napleon on the other hand
lost a big peace of land
coz he didn't want to fight britain without any cream (money)
lewis and clark jeffrson's guys
went to check whatS goiNG on IN the crAY
2007-01-06 13:32:16 · 9 answers · asked by what ever ? 2 in Society & Culture ➔ Cultures & Groups ➔ Other - Cultures & Groups
If you are serious about trying to write songs then I would suggest you join an online songwriting group (yahoo has several). You can post your song lyrics and others can read and critique them (and give you help and insight into making your songs better). Good luck!
2007-01-06 13:40:49 · answer #1 · answered by Lorenz 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is so bad. No one wants to hear such a terrible excuse for a song.
2007-01-06 21:41:42 · answer #2 · answered by notyou311 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
What ever you were drinking when you made the song up, I want a double.
2007-01-06 21:36:10 · answer #3 · answered by Big C 6 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Wow...just study like normal people do
2007-01-07 00:41:00 · answer #4 · answered by ♥ BuffaloGirl ♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm too overwhelmed to make an intelligent comment.
2007-01-06 21:47:17 · answer #5 · answered by SEEKER 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
hmmmmmmmmmm no its horrible, and stop freakin typin like that..........plus (use american words like COUNTRY not polish words for country like cray) were not polish
2007-01-06 21:36:11 · answer #6 · answered by Mac_Daddy_Z 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Oh...Oh...I think I'm about to throw up
2007-01-06 21:41:46 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2007-01-06 21:45:38 · answer #8 · answered by INDRAG? 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
STOP TYPING LIKE THAT! YOU LOOK LIKE A STUPID HO! MY GOD, ITS SO GAY.
jUhYgUkIjUnJ ITS SO DUMB.
2007-01-06 21:34:44 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋