this certain love is irreplaceble, the kind of love that leaves a permanent scar & effect on one's body, mind, heart, and soul. a certain love that will never die, a loe that will always be felt but never be fully understood. this love that will never love another no abandon you, a love that is only ment for you and no one else. the love that could burden your life or make you the happiest man-being on this earth.
this love is deep, thislove can barely survive without your love, but even without your love, this love will live. it will never fade, but will nourish from its roots as best as it can to stay alive. a love that will never stop burning for you, the love thats always going to be there and will never be less, but could be more. this love can bare pain & sorrow and will never evolve into a flaming hatred, a patient love, a love that will always forgive you.
this love can't just fit in a box but takes up the very air you breath. a love that was a sacrfice and this love, this certain love is my love. my love... my love that i have for you. i love you so much....
2007-01-06 13:19:18 · 14 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
i think i used the word love alot lol. but i was just looking for a file and i came across this poem a i wrote last year.
2007-01-06 13:25:41 · update #1
I think it's great. I hope the guy that it was written for knows how much he is loved and loves you in return.
2007-01-06 13:47:40 · answer #1 · answered by penhead72 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The more I read this ,the more I wondered, if this was a love story, I also wondered if this guy had any idea how you felt about him. You said you loved a lot but you never defined what a return love would mean to you, I never felt that you are or ever would be happy, and did you get any emotional return by your professing love without any love in return.
2007-01-06 13:59:15 · answer #2 · answered by Charles H 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i think it is awesome! u have a way of saying things. i like it. i think u shouldnt use the word 'love' so much, even though the poem is about love. other than that, it is a really good peom, and if u keep trying, i think u cood have the potential to be a famous poet.
2007-01-06 13:23:33 · answer #3 · answered by blue-eyed brunett 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad...as long as it is sent to a male (you are a female, are you not!) who doesn't mind your "wearing your emotions on your sleeve" and wading through a fountain of gush. (There are a few grammatical, spelling, and typo errors, e.g., "ment" instead of "meant", "loe" instead of "love", "no abandon" instead of "nor abandon" etc.) Try reading Sonnet 116 by William Shakespeare or some of the love poetry of Elizabeth & Robert Browning.
"Love" is never one sided! I know, for I am in love....and as the old cliche goes, "You are judged not by how much YOU love (no one could care less), but by how much others love you."
2007-01-06 13:55:34 · answer #4 · answered by drdos43 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
If any girl ever wrote such a poem to me, I would be running arround right now trying to think of a worthy poem as a come back ;)
2007-01-06 13:46:47 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-06 14:22:52 · answer #6 · answered by pattijohughes 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The Will is positive. It certainly expresses the ideal and love in spirit that is separated from all that is judgment. The Judgment is negative.
2007-01-06 13:52:16 · answer #7 · answered by Psyengine 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
OOH dawlin...lemme say....that is the prettyest darn thang i have eva herd from someone i don't know. will that be read at ur wedding. it should be.. I would love to use it as lyrics for my band. send me an email wantedisnothere@yahoo.com
i luv it doll face
2007-01-06 14:10:53 · answer #8 · answered by .....Want_To_Feel_Wanted..... 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I <3 LOVE <3 the fact you don't rhyme in your poem. It makes it more meaningful. Thanks for sharing with us!
2007-01-06 13:29:59 · answer #9 · answered by Kruton 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Vogon poetry is mild by comparison.
2007-01-06 13:24:58 · answer #10 · answered by Andrew 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋