My Love is your love to keep and to hold....
to never forsake you as we grow old....
to love and to cherish threw thick and threw thin....
to be with you till the very end.....
so take this gift that i give to you....
never use' mistreat ' or abuse..
take my love and handle with care..
so the next time you need it ....it will be there....
2007-01-06 07:47:02 · 9 answers · asked by angelheart 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it I'd say you have some talent there :) keep up the good work this could go somewhere, good luck perhaps submit it to a publisher.
2007-01-06 07:52:46 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Nice
2007-01-06 15:56:29 · answer #2 · answered by ~The Medieval Islander~ 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Its nice. It would make for a nice wedding vow.
2007-01-06 15:58:11 · answer #3 · answered by Thumper 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Really good, actually! Nice rhythm.
2007-01-06 15:50:52 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice, but don't try to fulfill it.
2007-01-06 15:56:40 · answer #5 · answered by Dorkboy 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats pretty good, im sure you can send it in somewhere and get it published
2007-01-06 15:57:46 · answer #6 · answered by weasel 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
verry nice! you got talent
2007-01-06 15:53:37 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
wish someone would say that to me!
2007-01-06 15:49:23 · answer #8 · answered by ohhh lalalala 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its sweet. =)
2007-01-06 15:52:13 · answer #9 · answered by $ I~♥~ELMO $ 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋