What do you think of this poem?

Question

Would you?

He asked me
Would you cry if I said I loved you
Would you want to run away
What would you say, if I asked you to marry me
Even though he knows we’ll never see each other’s face.

And do you really mean it
When you say you’ll always hold me tight
Or is this just in the moment
This moment I try so hard to fight.

I can’t live in today
My heart isn’t build that way
If you wanna be with me
Then show me that you’ll really stay.

And he said
Would you cry if I said I loved you
Would you want to run away
What would you say, if I asked you to marry me
Even though he knows we’ll never see each other’s face.

I’d say yes I wanna marry you
Yes, I want to be with you all the time
And well, if you really said you loved me
Then I might just break down and cry.

Yes I do wanna marry you, and that’s all I that could say
Even though I know, oh I know
We’ll never gonna see each other’s face.

Thank you everyone for your compliments. =)

Answer 1

WOW!!! That is just sooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!! Make sure you don't ever lose the motivation to express yourself in verse................................baby, you are da bomb!!!!!!!! (That's a good thing.............:)

Answer 2

Wow Very Good!! Keep up the good work!

Answer 3

It is a very nice poem...

It has a lot of feeling in it...like it comes straight from your heart.....i like it!

Answer 4

pretty conventional

Answer 5

Awesome **********