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I have this story about a sixteen year old who thought she loved this guy alot and so she had sex with him and got pregnant. And she ended up telling him and in the process found out who he was cheating with, her best friend. She gets a new boyfriend too. One day the baby is with her sister and she gets a call from her sister telling her to rush home as she is talking with her old friend and the new woman of her ex boyfriend and baby daddy's eye. She goes home to find her daughter not breathing so well with a high fever. So she takes her to the hospital and a few hours later the baby dies. I want something else to happen between then but I am not sure, but I think I should rebuild her confidence in herself or what before I make the seqeal

Answer 1

She reads about how babies die and thinks the baby died because the doctors had missed a breathing problem he had - which she had taken the baby to the doctors and complained about before. She goes to the hospital and they are like "what do you know, you are just a slutty teenage mother you probably neglected the baby anyway."
But she fights them and eventually proves it was their fault. New legislation gets passed that saves loads of babies lives because of her and she gets $2,000,000 compo and is a millionaire and famous for saving babies lives. Her baby daddy comes crawling back and says he loves her and she's like "no way, you only want me for my money, I go out with Adam Brody from the OC now."