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Handling and solving the problems that arise on the work site in order to achieve the end result in accordance with determined quality and quantity and *within the determined time*.
2007-01-05 19:42:57 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
...within the specified time.
...within the allotted time.
2007-01-05 19:45:23 · answer #1 · answered by Esma 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Handling and solving the problems that arise on the work site in order to achieve the end result in accordance with the determined quality and quantity and within the allotted period of time.
2007-01-05 19:45:00 · answer #2 · answered by Karma 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, two things first...
This is not a sentence. It's a fragment. Since it's not a sentence there should not be a period at the end.
Also, it is a run-on. There's a lot going on in that fragment.
It sounds like it might be a part of a resume? Or maybe a job description or for a manual?
I'll try to reword it and keep it a fragment, okay?
Solving the problems that arise on the work site to maintain high standards of quality and quantity (of product) in a timely manner
It's good to have only one verb at the beginning so I picked the more impressive word. Also try not to use "in order to" because it weakens the phrase
If this is for a resume one of your other bullets should probably write about what skills you use to solve the problems.
2007-01-05 19:55:36 · answer #3 · answered by Jen 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Handling and solving the problems that arise on the work site in order to achieve the end result in accordance with expected quality and quantity and *within the allotted time*.
Handling and solving the problems that arise on the work site in order to achieve the end result in accordance with determined quality and quantity and *within the agreed upon time*.
2007-01-05 19:46:24 · answer #4 · answered by sweetsal 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"Handling and solving the problems that arise on the work site in order to achieve the end result in accordance with pre-determined quality and quantity within the agreed-upon time." or you could say "prescribed time."
2007-01-05 19:47:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
the word determined isn't you only problem here. It's a very wordy sentence that the reader gets lost in. I read it several time and still couldn't understand it. Try spliting it up into 3 sentences then you don't have to worry about repeated that word.
2007-01-05 20:06:52 · answer #6 · answered by IKB 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
set
ordained
planned
specified
but i think that sentence is unlcear sounding for a resume. try-- "solving problems in order to meet workplace goals, especially product quality, product quantity, and meeting deadlines."
a potential boss wants to see that you can make a point without being too wordy. this is mark twains first rule of style, by the way.
2007-01-05 19:47:12 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Before deadline. Specified time.
2007-01-05 19:45:59 · answer #8 · answered by Cspeedy 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How bout within the timeline? Or maybe b4 the deadline?
2007-01-05 19:46:16 · answer #9 · answered by Wei"Oliver"Hsuen 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I would use "within the specified time"
2007-01-05 19:45:56 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
within the specified time
2007-01-05 19:45:25 · answer #11 · answered by witchfromoz2003 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋