this is the link
http://teenpoetry.student.com/poem.php?pid=257418
2007-01-05 16:30:12 · 15 answers · asked by Anonymous in Beauty & Style ➔ Other - Beauty & Style
I think that it is wonderful
2007-01-05 16:31:27 · answer #1 · answered by ashleighshea1982 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm so happy you shared your poem, I felt a heavy heart in your writing. I could not stop reading it until the end. So you had a great way of keeping it hot. Best wishes to you in your future works...when you have strong feelings about any subject the reader can feel it. Have a wonderful new year 2007. Study hard and I hope your dreams come true in whatever you plan to do in life. Mama Jazzy Geri
2007-01-05 16:39:12 · answer #2 · answered by Mama Jazzy Geri 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was absolutely beautiful, I'm trying to dry my bitter eyes, for they weep, it is but your demise that has brought such pain, that I must ask again, who best tho with such words of delight? You are a true poet. Bravo maestro!
2007-01-05 16:44:39 · answer #3 · answered by sweetpeasmum 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well some of it is very nice! and some are so so sad! i gave it a 9
2007-01-05 16:39:52 · answer #4 · answered by Kas-O 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's really deep. moving to say the least. sounds like some of my old poems.
2007-01-05 16:37:18 · answer #5 · answered by Brenna 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was one of the most depressing poems i have ever read.
beautiful, just beautiful.
2007-01-05 16:41:34 · answer #6 · answered by garmaijowee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its very good (I like the ending part).
2007-01-05 16:47:58 · answer #7 · answered by Instealer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I really liked it, and i hope your special person comes for you because you don't deserve to feel that way...
2007-01-05 16:37:00 · answer #8 · answered by mscity05 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it a lot. Keep doing what you do.
2007-01-05 16:33:34 · answer #9 · answered by Michelle 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its very nice keep it up. you could become a famous poet you never know right? ; )
2007-01-05 16:38:59 · answer #10 · answered by Chaaarlie! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋