i wrote half of my sonnet but i dont know what else to write.what do u think of it so far?

Question

it had to be about public persona vs. private persona. what should i add?



when people see her their first impression is that she is shy.
but looks can be decieving
"she is the quiet one" is what is in the public eye
but seeing isnt always believing.

They say "Dont judge a book by it's cover"
"Things arnt always what they seem"
but her true self is what she needs to uncover.
That makes her want to scream.

Answer 1

for that reason
she has always been the "dark horse"
she behaves like a duck
calm and unraffled from outside
but paddles with great vigour from inside..
thats what she is..
an achiever..
who stays away from the limelight
she makes her parents & friends proud
as she adds another feather to her hat..

that day is not far
when the world wud bow to her..
thay will admit that she is modest enough
and modesty is not only an ornament
but also a guard to virtue..

Answer 2

The things she keeps hidden are only for her
and not to be known to the crowd
If she can sneak through this very tough time
she hopes she will then stand proud

Answer 3

it's good, actually. you did a good job of keeping to the subject and making it fit the rhyme requirements without forcing it.