WHAT Changes should it have ?

Question

BESIDE SPELLING AND HOW DO I MAKE IT A SONG

jefferson was the greatest guy
he wanted to expand the cray (cray mean country in polish )
we found a french LAND
which was lousinia territory
that wad in december 1803
and bonaparte todally agreed
jefferson us govRNER
he put the money right over there
15 million $ wasn't that mush
so we bouhgt lousina
which made us rich
land, farm shipping and money
let us have lots of honey
napleon on the other hand
lost a big peace of land
coz he didn't want to fight britain without any cream (money)
lewis and clark jeffrson's guys
went to check whatS goiNG on IN the crAY

Answer 1

Change the whole idea,
or just erase