Gotta start a new
It's the end of me and you
I gotta make my own
I got my tears
There's so much to fear
But I got to start a new
It's bout time you realized
Nows not the time to cry
I gotta let you go
We had our ups
We had our downs
We laughed, we cried
But in the end we always fight
It's in the past now
In time we'll be friends
But until then
I gotta start a new
Theres things I wish we didnt do
A part of me is still in love with you
But compatable is something we are not
Our flame is now just a spark
So I'm lettin you go
Cause we both know
I gotta start a new
We had our ups
We had our downs
We laughed, we cried
But in the end we always fight
It's in the past now
In time we'll be friends
But until then
I gotta start a new
2007-01-05 12:09:09 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I think the idea is vastly over-used. I think you need to use some more descrptive words that provide more of the emotion than the actions. You want the reader to feel your words.
2007-01-05 12:13:42 · answer #1 · answered by surfer_grl_ca 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
AWSOME just what i needed to read right now, just broke up with my bf of 6 months, that's exactly how i feel
2007-01-05 20:14:57 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great!!!! Put it to good music and if there is a good singer, it could be an awesome song!
2007-01-05 20:10:52 · answer #3 · answered by ~Geeks Will Rule The World~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if u give it the rite beat and the rite instruments it could be a really good song
2007-01-05 20:15:31 · answer #4 · answered by dancerbabe32506 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think you have potential. You should find someone to put music to this. Maybe you are musically inclined also?
2007-01-05 20:15:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't I repeat don't give up your day job
2007-01-05 20:11:13 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Naahh....
by ther bye, it's "anew," NOT "a new"....
2007-01-05 20:25:40 · answer #7 · answered by Ludwig1251 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋