HELLO I AM WRITING a song about the lousinia purcahse actually it is an assigment that i have to do so the teacher gave us questions that we have to answer and i did and me and my group tried to make a good song out of it . the questions that we had to answer what date was it sold answer is december 1803 . second q how mush did they but it answer 15 million $ . who bought it the answer jefferson from usa . who sold it answer was napleon baonaparte . why was it sold coz france wanted to declar a war on brirtain and it didn't have enought money to declar it . who explored it answer lewis and clark why was it important . coz america had more land to plant and farms and doubled the size of usa . last question why was the purcahse was illegale answer coz it was not indicated in the consitution /. will her is the song that i wrote could u improve it for me and say to me what kind of musice match with it thankx ?
2007-01-05 11:59:29 · 5 answers · asked by what ever ? 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
jefferson was the greatest guy
he wanted to expand the cray (cray mean country in polish )
we found a french
which was lousinia territory
that wad in december a803
and bonaparte todally agreed
jefferson us govener
he put the money right over there
15 million $ wasn't that mush
so we bouhgt lousina
which made us rich
land, farm shipping and money
let us have lots of honey
napleon on the other hand
lost a big peace of land
coz he didn't want to fight britain without any cream (money)
lewis and clark jeffrson's guys
went to check what goign on on the cray
2007-01-05 12:00:50 · update #1
i meant 1803 and i means a french lan and i ment that was
2007-01-05 12:03:46 · update #2
can u tell u me how to improve it besid ethe spelling how could i make it a song
2007-01-05 12:11:39 · update #3
It could possibly be a country song if you added more of a chorus.
2007-01-13 01:18:44 · answer #1 · answered by The Great Walrus 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
First you should spell everything right first of all. next take a look at lyrics to songs and look how they have it written; format, how many versus, chorus's, etc. Then brainstorm. Brainstorming really helps. It helps me with writing and projects. I always plan out. Get your group together and plan it out. Think of ideas and make the choices of which ideas you like. It will help and you will have a good song!
2007-01-13 05:37:58 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good luck. Try using spell check next time to make sure all your words are spelled correctly
2007-01-13 08:32:36 · answer #3 · answered by Chris 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats sounds nothing like a song, unless you are rapping it. You definately have to re do that whole thing
2007-01-05 12:09:23 · answer #4 · answered by Grand am fan 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
the best thing to do is right it with correct spelling. That will improve it alot...g/l
2007-01-05 12:08:44 · answer #5 · answered by ccdispatch911 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋