Is there anything in this pic that I need to fix?

Question

I did this picture about 2 days ago, but before I color it I'm making sure its good to go.
Do you see anything that I can work on or fix?
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/45988967/

Answer 1

Hey Blue,

Great job, nice, simple, proportions look right on, has character, good hair. If you wanted to, you could always come back to this anyway if you have it on the computer. That could give you a sequence of the picture with different coloring, shading, etc.

Answer 2

Yep! there are things you must correct. The eyes, look carefully and you shall realise that there is something totally wrong with the shape of the eyes. There's also something odd about the mouth. Otherwise, nice try!

Answer 3

cool character sketch, Im not sure how you plan on coloring it, but maybe add some definition using different skin tones to put more detail into the collar bone area and using different shades in the hair.

Answer 4

I'd say a few more strokes in the hair to give a little more definition, but otherwise you are ready to go.

Answer 5

Looks fine, the first answerer seems to have covered all points that anyone could make.

Answer 6

Looks like a typical Japanese artists version of American. The eyes are too round and too big. Nose and mouth are also exagerated too small. Mouth is crooked. It doesn't look like anybody.

Answer 7

It needs sun glasses

Answer 8

I'm not much into anime but I think it looks pretty good...

Answer 9

my first reaction was that it looked like a japenese animation. name her Storme

Answer 10

I like it.