Will you go to my Myspace page and post a comment about my poem? (It's under "Interests, General") I am thinking about writing lyrics for bands, but I need to know if my words are any good first...Here is a link to my page.
http://www.myspace.com/dirtysatanist666
Your comments are greatly appreciated. Plus, the person who gives me the most honest, helpful comment gets 10 points!
2007-01-04 21:45:53 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Computers & Internet ➔ Internet
Please post the comment on my myspace page....
2007-01-04 22:00:46 · update #1
You have good writing skills and I love the way you rhyme, but if I heard a song with those words, I would not want to listen to it because it's too violent. That's just my opinion but you should write what you feel because you are very talented. Just because I would not listen to it, doesn't mean that it won't make a good song. Everyone has their own choice of music. Good Luck!
2007-01-06 11:33:46 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Tee 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well it's dark. But its almost like you were trying too hard to make it dark. Does that make sense? Anyway it was a good poem. I don't see it as a song to be honest. But songs are not the easiest things to write. I write songs. www.myspace.com/doubleoverjack
Keep up the good work though. Remember don't try to be anything just be yourself and let it flow.
2007-01-05 06:00:04 · answer #2 · answered by polystyrene_high 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow..i think its really good..it would make a great song. you should deffinitly write lyrics for bands
2007-01-05 05:55:34 · answer #3 · answered by Ashleyxo 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋