rate out of 10 pease?

Question

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I guess people come and go
And I’ll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of all the things we’ve become

You can’t say you didn’t know
I’ve always been there to let it show
But I’m going to go now
Maybe I’ll see you around now

This could be something I’ll regret
But never something I’ll forget
I’ll let you know though
When this all pass me below

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I guess people come and go
And I’ll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of all the things we almost became

Bye Now

People come and go
And I guess I'll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of the things we became

It finally got to my head
Of where I should be instead
So here I am letting go of your hand
And I hope you'll understand

Trust me I know it's kind of sad
To give up on the things we had
But hey maybe it's for the best
This way my heart has a chance to rest

You can't say you didn't know
I've always been there to let it show
But hey I'm going to go now
Maybe I'll see you around now

Answer 1

If you're under 35 then a 10 If you're over 45 then a 4.
I Cr 13;8a

Answer 2

2

Answer 3

4

Answer 4

6

Answer 5

Often times I hear a great song that seems really deep, but when I look at the lyrics without the music they seem lame. Set to the right music, especially if you emphasize the last throughout the song, it could have a decent imapact. but, the three stanza's are each saying the same thing so: 5
I point for content; a "letting go" song
2 points for integrity
1 point for not being gangsta rap
1 point for the creative impact of the last line.

Answer 6

7 I'd like it to rhyme a little more! Nice job though!

Answer 7

6-7
Edit rhyming a little bit

Answer 8

7,its nice.

Answer 9

8 nice poem ;)

Answer 10

3... incredibly corny.