I guess people come and go
And I’ll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of all the things we’ve became
You can’t say you didn’t know
I’ve always been there to let it show
But I’m gonna go now
Maybe I’ll see you around now
And do me a favor and don’t come back
Cause I’ll push you away
Do me a favor and don’t come back
Cause it’s not okay
2007-01-04 17:05:59 · 31 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Bye Now
People come and go
And I guess I'll do the same
But I just wanted to let you know
Of the things we became
It finally got to my head
Of where I should be instead
So here I am letting go of your hand
And I hope you'll understand
Trust me I know it's kind of sad
To give up on the things we had
But hey maybe it's for the best
This way my heart has a chance to rest
You can't say you didn't know
I've always been there to let it show
But hey I'm going to go now
Maybe I'll see you around now
2007-01-07 14:32:12 · update #1
Four out of Ten. Your poem for the girl/boy you want to part with?
Even in poetry it's best to pay attention to grammar.
Of all the things we have BECOME.
Maybe I'll see you around now...you lost the rhyme (know, show).
But I am going to go now. 'gonna' doesn't impress anyone.
Because, not Cause ('cause is acceptable for some)
What is more important here, your writing skill or your 'Goodbye John/Jane message?
2007-01-04 17:14:01 · answer #1 · answered by WMD 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:10:07 · answer #2 · answered by Chris 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:07:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:07:11 · answer #4 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:06:58 · answer #5 · answered by Papa 7 · 1⤊ 1⤋
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2007-01-05 01:12:10 · answer #6 · answered by tiff 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:08:12 · answer #7 · answered by Meha C 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
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2007-01-05 01:06:55 · answer #8 · answered by ? 7 · 2⤊ 2⤋
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2007-01-05 01:07:19 · answer #9 · answered by Still Crazy... 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
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2007-01-05 01:06:53 · answer #10 · answered by Jessica R 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋