"Montag encounters a gentle seventeen-year-old girl named Clarisse McClellan, who opens his eyes to the emptiness of his life with her innocently penetrating questions and her unusual love of people and nature."
i'm having trouble putting this into different words because eveytime i do, the meening seems to change or it doesn't sound all that good.
2007-01-04 12:39:53 · 6 answers · asked by LITTLE GREEN GOD 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
WOW! you guys are awesome! anybody want to write the entire summary for me?
(just kidding........unless........)
2007-01-04 12:52:26 · update #1
i can see you're reading farenheit 451. i would maybe rephrase the sentence into "Clarisse McClellan's curiosity and love for life, although unusual in the society, has helped Montag realize that his life contains nothing of true value.
2007-01-04 12:46:00 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
a gentle seventeen-year-old girl named Clarisse McClellan innocently ask questions and has an unusual love of people and nature that helps Montag open his eyes to the emptiness of his life.
2007-01-04 20:46:44 · answer #2 · answered by TheApocalypticOrgasm 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
For one, it's too long. You generally want to keep your sentences to about 20 words, as you'll tend to lose your reader's interest after that. And you'll want to keep your paragraphs, again generally, about 80-90 words. So ...
Montag encounters a gentle 17-year-old girl named Clarisse McClellan. She opens his eyes to the emptiness in his life with her innocent yet penetrating questions, and her unusual love of people and nature.
2007-01-04 21:35:57 · answer #3 · answered by Gamer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Clarisse , a gentle 27 yr old, opened Montag's eyes to the emptimess of his life with her innocent & penetrating questons and her special love of people & nature.
I would not use the word ' unusual ' as a lot of people do love others & nature.
2007-01-04 20:46:41 · answer #4 · answered by kate 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Try to make it simplier. ie
Montag meets gentle seventeen-year-old Clarisse McClellan, she opens his eyes to his life's emptiness with innocent penetrating questions and an unusual love of people and nature.
I'm sure you can improve on this the trick is almost always to make things simplier.
2007-01-04 20:47:18 · answer #5 · answered by Sid B 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
google it
2007-01-04 20:41:14 · answer #6 · answered by Push Play for Jonas 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋