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I'm 14... I just wrote that this morning.

2007-01-04 06:14:23 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

6 answers

its too long... can you make it short??
just a bit..

2007-01-04 06:17:56 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Extremely good, especially for such a young writer. I found your story to be very unique, and really deep, i like all the emotion and the imagination put into it. You´ve got alot of talent, im sure that you´re gonna go far. Keep it up and good luck! =))

2007-01-04 18:48:37 · answer #2 · answered by Jaded 7 · 0 0

Pretty good for a 14 year old.

2007-01-04 14:20:28 · answer #3 · answered by funmzire 5 · 0 0

writing is very good for a 14 years old, but the font color is not friendly. It is very hard to read.

2007-01-04 14:21:36 · answer #4 · answered by chocolate 2 · 0 0

It's really good. Deep and kinda emo, but i like it. You should write more!

2007-01-04 14:18:11 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

well it sounds good but it would be kinda good if well it wasnt red and idk it was hard for me to read, and it would also help if i kne he begianing, cuz i got kinda lost i also didnt read all of it, but other than that it was good

2007-01-04 14:20:03 · answer #6 · answered by *Living a {{ღяøM@N!Cღ}} Tragity* 5 · 0 0

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