cool thread!!
* Well when i was kid (8-12) i collect everythink about really popular annime in Poland - "Dragon Ball Z": posters, stickers, cards, etc.
* And since i am Sandra Bullock fan (14-?) i collect everythink about Sandy:
-) posters
-) movies ( i have 22 movies with Sandy)
-) and magazines (i have "Sandy album" - from now i have 100 pages)
-) And i have one picture on my wall and one mug
I can show you some pictures of my Sandy collection
2007-01-04 03:18:44 · 6 answers · asked by marta_grzonka 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
First of all, your question should read: Can you correct these mistakes?
Not sure what you mean by "cool thread".
When I was a kid(age 8-12), I collected everything about popular animation in Poland-"Dragon Ball Z" posters, stickers, cards, etc.
Since I am a Sandra Bullock fan(since the age of 14), I collect everything about Sandra:
Posters, movies(i currently have 22), magazines(I have 100 pages in my "Sandy album"), and I have one picture on my wall and one mug
I can show you some pictures of my Sandra Bullock collection.
Is that what your question was about? Correcting the mistakes in your write-up?
2007-01-04 03:28:15 · answer #1 · answered by STRETCH 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
When I was a eight years old, I collected everything relating to "Dragon Ball Z" (a very popular anime in Poland). I had everything from posters to stickers to cards.
Around age 14 I became a Sandra Bullock fan and have been collecting everything Sandy ever since. I have posters and 22 movies. From my Sandy magazine collection I have created a "Sandy Album" which has grown to 100 pages!
I can show you some pictures of my collection
2007-01-04 11:36:09 · answer #2 · answered by puma 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool thread!!
* Well when I was a kid (8-12 years old), I collected everything about really popular animals in Poland - "Dragon Ball Z": posters, stickers, cards, etc.
* Since I am now a Sandra Bullock fan (14 years of age onwards), I collect everything about her including
-) Posters
-) Movies ( I have 22 movies with Sandy)
-) Magazines (I have "Sandy album" - I currently have 100 pages)
-) I also have one picture on my wall and one mug
I can show you some pictures of my Sandy collection
2007-01-04 11:28:54 · answer #3 · answered by quatt47 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool thread!!
* Well when i was kid (8-12) I collected everything about really popular anime in Poland :"Dragon Ball Z": posters, stickers, cards, etc.
* And since I am Sandra Bullock fan (14-?) I collect everything about Sandy:
- posters
-movies ( i have 22 movies with Sandy)
-and magazines (i have "Sandy album" - from now i have 100 pages)
- And i have one picture on my wall and one mug
I can show you some pictures of my Sandy collection
2007-01-04 11:25:15 · answer #4 · answered by barrelracer2120 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Where shall I start?
Capitalize I
There is no word everythink; use everything
Use a kid, rather than just kid; use a Sandra Bullock fan, rather than Sandra Bullock fan
Omit the first word well
2007-01-04 11:25:30 · answer #5 · answered by fcas80 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What mistake!! the sentences are all muddled and wrongly spelt ..
No disrespect to you ..you want to learn English .. good for you ..well done ....
What you need to do is ..show 1 or 2 sentences at a time ..
because there are so many ways to correct each sentence . .you can absorb them easier ..rather than to many sentences ..good luck
2007-01-04 11:40:52 · answer #6 · answered by JJ 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋