I wrote this song a while ago..but hey i hope you like it. :)
Nothing better
And I get lost in the clearest of paths
With arrows pointing me in the right way
The way that I’ve been searching for
And I can’t see
Even though you’re standing right in front of me
And I’m just building up the reasons
I thought you wanted to see
And they tell me that it’s right
Sticking to the familiar always keeps you in the light
Isn’t it funny, I never knew
That the dark was such unfamiliar territory
Cuz now I see more clearly than before
I really can’t be more than what I am
I can’t change
To nothing good anyway
Nothing better
And it’s funny to remember
This vague feeling of inadequacy
So pull me down
Hold me don’t to the ground
Keep my feet here
I don’t wanna float back
Into the confusion that used to be
My only source of clarity…
2007-01-04 02:51:14 · 12 answers · asked by Jaded 7 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
And there you stand
why do you smile
I’m not sure, not of anything, no
But the way you’re looking at me now is making me a feel a little better
It little bit calmer
Yeah, a little better inside
A little more human.
Cuz now I see more clearly than before
I really can’t be more than what I am
I can’t change
To nothing good anyway
Nothing better.
2007-01-04 02:51:24 · update #1
Yeah i completely agree with you on that one, kristonianinstitution. Like i said, i wrote this a long time ago, i was just a kid. But thank you for your constructive criticism. I appreciate it. =)
2007-01-04 03:00:16 · update #2
wow that is really really good....!! man....your frikin awsome if you can right something that good!! =]]]
2007-01-04 02:57:15 · answer #1 · answered by ♥ court ♥ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8 thumbs up
2007-01-04 02:53:14 · answer #2 · answered by mr.JAW58 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty deep overall. I seems to lack a "flow". It sounds like you're depressed or offering explanations to something. Otherwise, it is good.
2007-01-04 02:54:18 · answer #3 · answered by flip4it 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
too dramatic and I think you could've had said all of that in about four paragraphs with the right wording. But good effort
2007-01-04 02:54:32 · answer #4 · answered by kristonianinstitution 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Pretty deep one my friend. I like it. Go have it reviewed and rated on poets.com
2007-01-04 02:55:46 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Deep!
2007-01-04 02:55:16 · answer #6 · answered by 7894 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sorry but if someone gave me this poem/song... i'd think they were a weirdo.
2007-01-04 02:54:20 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
nice
2007-01-04 02:53:52 · answer #8 · answered by cheez 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good
2007-01-04 02:54:36 · answer #9 · answered by punky89 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
bites the big one
2007-01-04 02:53:52 · answer #10 · answered by loki 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋